Friday, October 7, 2005

Acrostickiness

A poetry dance© assignment

Even when our eyes meet and
Violence is unspoken
Ever in the darkest night
Ruins of civility litter the room

Twelve times twelve denials
Heaven so far away
Ether just an open frequency on the car radio

Save me from myself
Angel mine, almost divine
Mother never told me all the things
Evil holds close to her breast

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow...  speaks volumes.  :)  I have been in that relationship, yes I have.  Wonderful poetry Paul, as always.  :)  Thanks for Dancing with us.

Dawn

Anonymous said...

Very impressive Paul.  Good to have you back.  Sorry to hear it was raining in Sicily.

SINS

Anonymous said...

A nice interesting poem..I really like that one line.."ruins of civility litter the room" it paints such a picture in my mind.  Paul you should check out http://www.fanstory.com
They do stories and poem, you review stuff and you get reviewed too. I've been on it a couple of months now and I really like it.  Sandi

Anonymous said...

Nice, Nannook.

xoxoxo,

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