Now ... for the clincher...I'd like you to find another journal or blog and write a Haiku about it.So I did. Twice.
sun burns bright above
the shadow of the iris
quivers in the grass
five bags hang in turn
for the preservation of
just one girl's head noise
8 comments:
i like how you added the links into the poem. nifty.
SINS
Oh! You picked my favorite journal! That's ok. Rebecca is a favorite of many!
Very nice! Michelle
Very, very clever and well done Paul! Check out mine... at Touch of Empathy
Be well,
Dawn
http://journals.aol.com/princesssaurora/CarpeDiem/
Poetry:
Very pretty and very creative! I am impressed! Thanks for playing and dancing with us this week. :)
Dawn
very nice paul
natta
Paul,
Your Haiku, struck me in a most entrancing way. I must thank you, for striking an emotional cord within. With your most eloquent way with words.
Thank you. I really appreciated it on this day.
Rebecca
I forgot about this journal of yours...it's good....love both the haiku's...Sandi
wow..saw your haiku over at Pamela's..so I hopped over here and saw you got two! wow! nice ones!
btw, congrats on being a ViVi Award Nominee!
take care,
Gem :-)
http://journals.aol.com/libragem007/JournallyYours
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