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About Me
- Call me Paul
I'm a Canadian, but don't hold that against me. We're really quite nice once you get to know us.
I'm an Atheist, but don't hold that against me. We're really quite nice, once you get to know us.
I think you've got a beautiful body, and if you wanted to, you could hold that against me.
4 comments:
The question should be Can it stop a Hurricane???? Only kidding nice poem...Sandi
I live Haiku's thanks to you before you challenged me I had never written one in my life, We had a day like this today and now I have your words to sum it up Thanks but Paul ... Payl Dahling I wanted to say...a-h-h-h Back to the business at Bat...I mean at Witch...I mean at Pumkin...a-a-a-ah...I have been possessed by someone desiring a fat Skeleton...I mean a Broom...OH! Gosh Nothing I want to say comes out right as I e-e-e-ee-ee-e-eK!
Hell-o-o-o-o-o-o My Swe-e-e-t ... Would you please drop by on the Eve Of Halloween so I may finish YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE...a-a-a-ah-g-h-
Great poetic words..
jo....
white straws, great description. too me they always look like fingers. it makes me stumble when i try to write about it because i don't like using the same desciption twice in any of my poems.
i thought this was a haiku, but i thought also besides 14 and 10 syllable oneliner's haiku was 5-7-5. educate me. is there another form for haiku?
in any case, well done.
SINS
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