Thursday, March 30, 2006

Hay(na)ku

   "Hay(na)Ku" is a poetry form invented by Eileen Tabios in 2003. Click here for a basic primer and some samples. Quite simply, it is a three line poem, inspired by the Japanese Haiku form, that has one word on the first line, two on the second, and three on the third. Number of syllables is not counted, and rhymes are not required. Here are some of my early attempts:

Winter
Sun shines
On snowy dog.

~~~~~~~~~~~~

Unblinking
Staring eyes
Go away cat.

~~~~~~~~~~~~

What
Is the
Definition of life?

Is
It simply
A beating heart?

Or
Is there
Some thing more?

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Always
Another room
Endless home improvements.


via Wil at
Snoozelets.
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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

You totally cheated on "some thing more?"

Poetry has rules for a reason, you know.  Follow 'em!!

Simon

Anonymous said...

I

need to

have more wine.

Anonymous said...

he
is seeking
warm sensuous rush

the
warm fire
brings a spark

colors
collide she attracts
his exploding dream

(lol!)
natalie

Anonymous said...

very intriguing Paul!
thanks!
nat