Another magnet poetry attempt. This one is an experiment, and I would very much like to hear your comments on it. To play along, visit the Poetry Dance Hall.
I must admit, with my adhd this was hard to follow :) I love words but got overwhelmed here. My kids both liked it, and have different interpretations of it from thier own point of view. :)
i'd be interested in the process of the words being placed...i'm not sure what you are going for, but in places i found myself navigating the words like a maze, sometimes horizontally, sometimes vertically...like a labyrinth of words, i guess...i can dig that.
I have been told that its a formula to writing poetry. I say the formula is simply a gift of harmony that some people are born with. http://journals.aol.com/shalalamenow/JustRambling
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I must admit, with my adhd this was hard to follow :) I love words but got overwhelmed here. My kids both liked it, and have different interpretations of it from thier own point of view. :)
Thanks again for dancing!
Dawn :)
http://poetrydancehall.blogspot.com/
i'd be interested in the process of the words being placed...i'm not sure what you are going for, but in places i found myself navigating the words like a maze, sometimes horizontally, sometimes vertically...like a labyrinth of words, i guess...i can dig that.
rachael
rachaelannerulestheworld
http://rachaelanne21.blogspot.com
Hi Paul, Great poems for the dance! -Tanya
I have been told that its a formula to writing poetry.
I say the formula is simply a gift of harmony that some people are born with.
http://journals.aol.com/shalalamenow/JustRambling
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