Tuesday, March 14, 2006

majik

   Another magnet poetry attempt. This one is an experiment, and I would very much like to hear your comments on it. To play along, visit the Poetry Dance Hall.

majik

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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I must admit, with my adhd this was hard to follow :)  I love words but got overwhelmed here.  My kids both liked it, and have different interpretations of it from thier own point of view.  :)

Thanks again for dancing!

Dawn :)
http://poetrydancehall.blogspot.com/

Anonymous said...

i'd be interested in the process of the words being placed...i'm not sure what you are going for, but in places i found myself navigating the words like a maze, sometimes horizontally, sometimes vertically...like a labyrinth of words, i guess...i can dig that.

rachael
rachaelannerulestheworld
http://rachaelanne21.blogspot.com

Anonymous said...

Hi Paul, Great poems for the dance! -Tanya

Anonymous said...

I have been told that its a formula to writing poetry.
I say the formula is simply a gift of harmony that some people are born with.
http://journals.aol.com/shalalamenow/JustRambling